Moment in time

In Te Ngahere we have been learning descriptive writing. We had to put descriptive words
in the writing. We had to describe a picture that was in a forest. I think I could of done more
because I only did three paragraphs and that wasn’t really much writing. I enjoyed this writing
because I like walking through forest and bushes so it was fun to describe a picture.

  Moment in time

Walking through all the bushes hear the sticks snap as you walk on  them,
hearing the bushes swaying in the wind. Feel the mud sticking to your shoes,
wondering where the path will lead you. Getting caught in all the vines hanging
down, listening to the bird tweets as you walk closer to the view. Pushing the flax
out of the way, shooing the insects as they fly around.

Smelling all the gross mud while walking through the forest, smell all the wild berries
as you get closer. Getting tired with your heavy backpack, wondering when your
going to stop, seeing the birds fly above your head. Feeling the tree bark as you
swipe your hand across the trees, hear the wood pigeons pecking at the trees.

The breeze hits you as you walk along the path, feeling hot and sweaty as you
walk closer. Getting eaten alive by the insects flying around, hearing the native
birds that call their friends.dying in the sunlight.

                                      There is the view!